Friday, April 8, 2011

Bike vs. Poetry

A Bike is better than poetry because you can get exercise, you can have fun and you can look sweet with it.It is true that poetry has strong feelings. But a bike is better because your design can also show your strong feelings.

-Zae'Shawn



Bike is going to win. One reason I think bike is going to win is because
you need it to go places. Places you can go on your bike are the store , friends' houses , or restaurants. Next, bikes are helpful because if
your car is broken and you have no money for cab, taxi, bus, or ride from a friend you can ride your bike. Last but not least, a bike is great because you do not always have †o drive your kids to school. They can ride their bike to school. It’s true that poetry is great when your mad it CALMs you down. But I think that a bike is better. In Conclusion a bike is better.
P.S Trick Bikes Are Cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
By Armani

Bike is better than poetry because when you have poetry you intend to sit in a chair and you're bored reading lots of words that you don't know what they mean half of the time. When you could be outside on a beautiful day flying through the warm air on a bike that's your favorite color!!!!! Reason 2: Poetry can't deliver morning newspapers if that's a kids morning job!.......a bike can!!!!!!!!!!! Reason 3: Poetry is soooooo not transportation! A bike is like the number one transportation for kids! Poetry can be funny and tongue twisting sometimes like the time I read pickety fence by: David McCord in the third grade. But poetry can't take you to a store,....... A BIKE CAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Kathrynne


I think a bike is better than poetry. You can ride a bike but you can’t ride poetry. Also a bike
can be any color but poetry isn’t a color. In addition, a bike has wheels but poetry doesn’t.
You can read poetry but you can’t read a bike. A bike is better than poetry because
you can ride it.I love to ride my bike with my friends. In conclusion, I think a bike is better than poetry.

By Alexandria.



POETRY IS BETTER THAN A BIKE. POETRY IS SMOOTH MUSIC. IT'S JUST LIKE JAZZ MUSIC, BUT THE PEOPLE WRITE WITH A SMOOTH VOICE. POETRY IS NICE TO LISTEN TO. BIKES ARE NICE TO RIDE. BUT POETRY IS BETTER THAN BIKE BECAUSE POETRY IS NICE AND SMOOTH.

-Torrez


I believe that poetry is better than bike. I believe that poetry is better because when you write poetry you can express your feelings. Also when you read poetry it can make you happy. Another thing is that poetry can help you fell better. Also poetry is beautiful. It is true that a bike is fun to ride on though. But as you can see poetry is fun to read and write.

By Selena



I think poetry is better than a bike because you can't express your self with a bike ,and bikes are very dangerous. Also poetry is good for your education.  True, if you can't drive than you can ride a bike, but you do not need a bike. You can walk while reading and writing poetry because poetry expresses your self. Its better to write poetry than to think about committing suicide while on a bike and get hit by a car =).

-Imanye



Poetry is way better than a bike. First, you can write while your doing it. Another one is, you can use thoughtful words. Also, it’s lots of types of poems you can write. You can ride a bike to a place. But you can’t write nice words of poetry on a bike. In conclusion, I love to write poetry which is way better than a bike.

By Chase

7 comments:

  1. My vote is for poetry. While I agree with bike's argument about transportation, I feel strongly about what poetry said about expressing feelings and emotions. I agree that poetry can make someone feel happy, or let them let out a particular emotion.

    Annnnd...even though no one made this argument, a majority of music and songs are also inspired by poems. :)

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  2. I vote for bikes! I think the argument about not understanding poetry half the time is funny! Sounds like someone needs to spend some more time in Mr. Curran's class!

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  3. Hands down, I agree with Chase.... it's poetry. Poetry is transportation for the mind and spirit! Mrs. Chisholm

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  4. I vote for bike. I agree that people can get good exercise on bikes also that they can save money on gas by using gas. I do however agree with Ms. Ritter, lots of songs are inspired by poems, even the RAP songs start out as poems for the younger viewers!!!!!!!!!!!

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  6. Torrez and Selena convinced me: Poetry!

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PLEASE CAST YOUR VOTE FOR THE INVENTION WITH THE BEST OVERALL ARGUMENT...NOT for individual students...THANKS!