Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Tooth Paste vs. Shoes

I think toothpaste is better than shoes because toothpaste helps prevent gingivitis .It also prevent cavities and other mouth infections .Last but not least it prevents stains among the plaque line.

Other pick:
Shoes can prevent getting cuts on your foot .
But , shoes also can get busted up quick when you play or wear them too much.

Conclusion:
I think toothpaste is better than shoes because you don't need shoes you need toothpaste.


-Chauntel


Shoes are better than toothpaste because,reason one: you don't need to have toothpaste togo to the store. Reason two: when you go to your best friend's wedding you don't need toothpaste on your feet
because it will just make the sittuation worse! Shoes are just plain stylish! tootpaste sooooooooo not!!!!!!!!! Toothpaste can brush your teeth and make your mouth smell good and get rid of some germs. But toothpaste can't cover someones stinky feet, if someone did use toothpaste it would just make the sittuation worse. So this is my arguement. "SHOES VS. TOOTHPASTE"

-KATHRYNNE






I believe shoes is better than a tube of toothpaste.First of all shoes keep you warm.Second of all shoes look cute on your feet instead of just your feet.Third of all shoes come in many sizes and shapes.It is true toothpaste keep your breath fresh but not shoes.Shoes can make your dressy clothes look even more dressy like heels or flats but not toothpaste.In conclusion shoes is a better invention than a tube of toothpaste.

--Danielle

8 comments:

  1. Toothpaste wins this one - Chauntel

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  2. I'm going with Kathrynne. Shoes!

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  3. Awesome job! I vote for shoes.

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  4. Not as many choices with toothpaste as there are with shoes.

    I vote shoes.

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  5. Danielle MontgomeryMarch 30, 2011 at 8:54 AM

    Chauntel gets my vote. I like how she added factual statements about the benefits of toothpaste!

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  6. I'm not going to vote since this project is clearly over, but I wanted to let you guys know that you did an awesome job with your persuasive writing. This is a really fun project that your teacher had you all work on. You all are great writers and will be savvy bloggers before you know it. I talked about your project in one of my recent blog posts because I liked it so much, take a look if you have a chance: https://teacherturnedtechguru.wordpress.com/2017/01/22/blog-projection-inspiration-2-d-1/

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