Friday, March 18, 2011

Popsicle vs Brush



Popsicle vs brush

who will win:brush

Topic sentence:
Brushes are better than popsicles.

Reason one:Brushes,brushses your hair and if you have nice lookig hair then you’ll look ok if you don’t have a brush ok went byebye.

Reason two  First of all when you Brush your hair your hail lays down your hair so it can look right or you’ll look like a hobo probably.


Reason three:Brushes have nice hard black brush and your hair will look fabu an if you don’t have a brush not so ok.


Concession:
Popsicles are nice and cold and have nice taste to it.

Rebuttal:
However you can’t brush a popsicle a popsicle can’t be flat.

Conclusion:
I love brushes because you will look ok.

Written by:Kaelyn

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