Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Poetry vs. iPod

Poetry lets you express your self you cant do that with an ipod. You need poetry to make the music you put on your ipod. and the ipod separates you from your family. Though the ipod has tons of music and apps. but you cant make a famous poem express your feelings and say sorry to someone at the same time. Try doing that with an ipod. so an ipod is an invention of want not need.

-Nia






Poetry and i pods are  cool but I  think poetry is better. I think poetry helps you think. When you do poetry you can do it your way and be best. And you can make up your own words. I pods you can  listen to music  but you can’t  change how it  sounds. How ever poetry you can do a lot with it  and you can make money and you can’t get paid for listening to music. Poetry is thinking. Before I pods pick poetry.


--Suhmer


The I Pod is better than Poetry because kids love technology, I Pod represents Apple and every
body loves music. You might say Poetry is better than the I Pod because Poetry has strong feelings,
But so does rap music on my I Pod. The Last time I checked, Poetry is not a touch screen at all, The I Pod
is. The I Pod is better than poetry.

P.S. I POD RULES

-Zae'Shawn

ipod is better
the ipod has more information
i love technology
the poetry is sweet and helps you get a girlfriend...
but the i pod is better.

-Le'Vance






I think a Ipod is better than poetry.You can listen to music on a ipod.
In addition you can play your favorite games.Also you can go on the internet.
It is true that you can read poetry all day. But i still think a Ipod is better because
i love to listen to music. In conclusion, i love Ipods

--Alexandria

7 comments:

  1. I vote for iPod vs. Poetry. Great reasons. Thanks!

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  2. Great points Nia. I'll go with Poetry.

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  3. Danielle MontgomeryMarch 30, 2011 at 9:20 AM

    Suhmer all the way!

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  4. Danielle MontgomeryMarch 30, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    Yikes I accidently skipped over Nia's when I scrolled down. After going back, I'd have to choose Nia. Very well written and persuasive, Although Suhmer's is good as well!

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  5. I vote for nia she made a great point.

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  6. I vote for poetry. Nia impressed me with her point about needing poetry (music) to put onto your iPod. Nice work.

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